| | My poem! I've never been undead before by Sam |    |
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| what do you think? | | i liked it | | 23% | [ 4 ] | | it was great! | | 35% | [ 6 ] | | i hated it! | | 0% | [ 0 ] | | dont quit your day job | | 0% | [ 0 ] | | you are amazing! i'm jealous | | 41% | [ 7 ] |
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SamsBarleyAlive
Traditionally Biotic
Posts: 3
Join date: 2009-03-06
Age: 20
 |  Subject: My poem! I've never been undead before by Sam  Tue Mar 10, 2009 9:30 pm | |
| Why am I alive?
I shouldn’t be breathing
I got shot in the chest
And no one is leaving
I remember it clearly
I was drifting away
Trying to tell phoebe
What I always meant to say
I thought that I said it
But I might have been wrong.
What’s going on?
Why aren’t I gone?
Wait, I’m not breathing.
But my skin has gone cold
My heart isn’t beating
What am I not being told
I put my hand on my body
And it comes up red.
I was shot and I’m here,
I must be undead.
By: Sam N. |
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SamsBarleyAlive
Traditionally Biotic
Posts: 3
Join date: 2009-03-06
Age: 20
| | Subject: Re: My poem! I've never been undead before by Sam Tue Mar 10, 2009 9:46 pm | |
| reply if you read?
please??? |
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LivingDead_Girl
Gathering in the Assembly Hall
Posts: 232
Join date: 2009-03-03
Age: 18
Location: Oakvale, Connecticut
| | Subject: Re: My poem! I've never been undead before by Sam Tue Mar 10, 2009 9:54 pm | |
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Kiera!!!!
Petting Gargoyle
Posts: 357
Join date: 2009-03-04
Age: 16
Location: Cali baby!!!
| | Subject: Re: My poem! I've never been undead before by Sam Fri Mar 20, 2009 11:46 pm | |
| beautiful!!! bravo, encore (not bieng fecetious) i dont think i spelled that right. |
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undeadgalwithpower99
Hearing about Tommy's Eye
Posts: 20
Join date: 2009-06-08
Location: ohio
| | Subject: Re: My poem! I've never been undead before by Sam Thu Jun 18, 2009 6:51 pm | |
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Xheart_hope2die
Noticing a Living Impaired w/a short skirt
Posts: 29
Join date: 2009-03-04
Age: 17
| | Subject: awesome Wed Jul 29, 2009 10:31 pm | |
| hey that was great. the best thing is that it made sense and IT REALLY FELT LIKE IT WAS ADAM. major props to you!!! brava! |
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JulieMarie
Writing Tommy a poem
Posts: 127
Join date: 2009-09-06
Age: 16
Location: ohio
| | Subject: Re: My poem! I've never been undead before by Sam Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:49 am | |
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Kiba
Traditionally Biotic
Posts: 8
Join date: 2009-12-23
Age: 19
Location: Andover
| | Subject: Ohhhhhh my Fri Jan 15, 2010 8:11 pm | |
| That was wicked awesome! That was beyond cool, I absolutely loved it! Normally I have criticism for a poem but that was crazy good. I demand you write more!  |
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gendeadislove
Phoebe
Posts: 2089
Join date: 2010-01-18
Age: 18
Location: places.
| | Subject: Re: My poem! I've never been undead before by Sam Tue Mar 30, 2010 7:47 pm | |
| wow. this is amazing!
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