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Kiera!!!!
Petting Gargoyle
Posts: 357
Join date: 2009-03-04
Age: 16
Location: Cali baby!!!
 |  Subject: Tear Drop...a poem  Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:28 am | |
| Tear Drop
My tears are blue,
Notice the color,
Full of truth to give one another.
My cheeks are red,
Hot as Fire,
I'll never be such a liar.
My body is rigid,
I'm full of hate,
For when you leave,
I cannot wait. |
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Kiera!!!!
Petting Gargoyle
Posts: 357
Join date: 2009-03-04
Age: 16
Location: Cali baby!!!
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:30 am | |
| i know it sounds like im...really mad, but truthfully i was in a great mood when i wrote this |
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undeadgalwithpower99
Hearing about Tommy's Eye
Posts: 20
Join date: 2009-06-08
Location: ohio
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Sat Jun 20, 2009 2:24 pm | |
| that was good better then anyother poem i think i have made |
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Kiera!!!!
Petting Gargoyle
Posts: 357
Join date: 2009-03-04
Age: 16
Location: Cali baby!!!
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Sat Jun 20, 2009 5:18 pm | |
| thanx!  |
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Xheart_hope2die
Noticing a Living Impaired w/a short skirt
Posts: 29
Join date: 2009-03-04
Age: 17
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Mon Jul 13, 2009 8:41 pm | |
| I like the message. my biggest pet peeve is syllables. but yours weren't off much. I rate it as a BRAVA! congratulations, that is the second highest rating in my case. |
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Kiera!!!!
Petting Gargoyle
Posts: 357
Join date: 2009-03-04
Age: 16
Location: Cali baby!!!
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Fri Aug 28, 2009 12:45 am | |
| thank you i really appreciate it |
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x.ZombieOli.x
Standing in front of flying tomatoes
Posts: 660
Join date: 2009-07-30
Location: Vlad Island
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:55 am | |
| Oh Em GEE. that poem is like PRO.!!!  xx |
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Kiera!!!!
Petting Gargoyle
Posts: 357
Join date: 2009-03-04
Age: 16
Location: Cali baby!!!
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Thu Oct 22, 2009 1:15 am | |
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lexylovedead
Traditionally Biotic
Posts: 5
Join date: 2009-11-27
Age: 16
Location: potage the colors r red,black,and white
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Fri Nov 27, 2009 7:55 am | |
| | *Bella Cullen* wrote: | Tear Drop
My tears are blue,
Notice the color,
Full of truth to give one another.
My cheeks are red,
Hot as Fire,
I'll never be such a liar.
My body is rigid,
I'm full of hate,
For when you leave,
I cannot wait. |
thats a good poem |
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Kiera!!!!
Petting Gargoyle
Posts: 357
Join date: 2009-03-04
Age: 16
Location: Cali baby!!!
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Thu May 06, 2010 12:58 am | |
| thanx guys!! i appreciate tha lovee!! |
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Kiera!!!!
Petting Gargoyle
Posts: 357
Join date: 2009-03-04
Age: 16
Location: Cali baby!!!
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Thu May 06, 2010 1:26 am | |
| Why am I here?
She asks, and He doesn't answer.
Is the end near?
She asks, He still doesn't answer.
Do You truely love just me?
She asks, Yes.
here's a poem i just wrote, it's called Why? |
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gendeadislove
Phoebe
Posts: 2089
Join date: 2010-01-18
Age: 18
Location: places.
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Wed May 19, 2010 10:03 pm | |
| love both the poems!! ♥ ur amazing. dont stop writing!!
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