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 a poem by me! "I love you..." (Warning: No rhymes)

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xxPrincessofDarknessxx
Traditionally Biotic


Posts: 3
Join date: 2009-12-18
Age: 15
Location: trying to deal with 8th grade && Trads :p

PostSubject: a poem by me! "I love you..." (Warning: No rhymes)   Sat Dec 19, 2009 1:14 am

When
you smile,


I
brighten up.


When
you laugh,


I
turn as bright as the sun.





When
you walk,


I
just watch.


When
you breathe,


I
can’t help but stare.





When
you talk to me,


I get
butterflies.


When
you look into my eyes,


I
swear I lose my train of thought.





When
you walk by me,


I
take in your scent.


When
you are sarcastic,


I
can’t help but to laugh.





When
you say you love me,


It
just reminds me.


Of
all the reasons,


Why I
love you.
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Keela
Finding out Tommy is on the Football team


Posts: 85
Join date: 2009-08-25
Location: On the baseball field in my Wonderland...la duh! =)

PostSubject: Re: a poem by me! "I love you..." (Warning: No rhymes)   Mon Dec 21, 2009 9:04 pm
I really like it. It's sweet.
And the no rhyming thing makes it unique.
Good job. XD
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lilyxlove
Listening to Margie Gab


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Join date: 2010-04-17
Age: 18

PostSubject: Re: a poem by me! "I love you..." (Warning: No rhymes)   Wed Apr 21, 2010 2:30 am
Kudos ^_^ I too like it. Smile
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